After reading my first composition draft again, I realized that what I had written was not as good and fluent as I had previously thought. I found out that I had left out many details and some words that I used were rather vague. Therefore I decided to put it on the blog post so that it can be a example of a bad composition. Finally, there were many incredible things that I had written in the draft. My ending was very unsatisfying so in conclusion, I hope to try and write a better composition next time and prevent making these mistakes again.
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Making mistakes is alright as long as you don't repeat that mistake again! I am happy that you realised the mistakes and will prevent yourself from making the same mistake in the future!
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